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I love the last 4 lines of the last stanza. In fact I lvoe the whole thing bar the 'bang'. *shrug* probably just me. There's just something about onomatopoeia that doesn't seem right but then again I can't think of anything else that could possibly go in there so ... yeah.


Really, it's brilliant mon amie


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